Thursday, June 16, 2011

No Remorse

Life in a shambles on the  ground

                                      at my feet
Memories  in   color   all   a  heap

                              blue and green
                                        acts unseen
Threads lying limply questioning

                                what the cost
                                          battle lost
         Worn well and emptied

                                        no remorse
                                 worthy course
Life in a shambles on the  ground

And so
i did the laundry


  1. How great is this!? What an amazing job of taking something we all have to "battle" and turning it into something so poetic. This matches the title of your blog so well. "Musings in Simplicity," yet you take something that should be simple, like laundry, and make it so complex and multi-layered.

    I'm so glad you've linked up with The Lightning and the Lightning Bug. You've got such a unique voice and such creative ideas. I can't wait to read more from you!

  2. I absolutely adore this. Taking something mundane and making it into the dramatic; much applause!!! Very, very talented and creative!


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