Life in a shambles on the ground
bittersweet
at my feet
Memories in color all a heap
blue and green
acts unseen
Threads lying limply questioning
Threads lying limply questioning
what the cost
battle lost
Worn well and emptied
no remorse
worthy course
Life in a shambles on the ground
And so
i did the laundry
Oh! I love it!
ReplyDeleteHow great is this!? What an amazing job of taking something we all have to "battle" and turning it into something so poetic. This matches the title of your blog so well. "Musings in Simplicity," yet you take something that should be simple, like laundry, and make it so complex and multi-layered.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you've linked up with The Lightning and the Lightning Bug. You've got such a unique voice and such creative ideas. I can't wait to read more from you!
I absolutely adore this. Taking something mundane and making it into the dramatic; much applause!!! Very, very talented and creative!
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